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Friday 11 September 2015

Emily's wonderful pie

variation on apple pie
Emily’s Wonderful pie
by Jane cornish

Emily was a girl the bought a pie at the bakery and it was 'squishy squashy mincey to munch flaky bakey crispy to crunch' then along came a girl called Liz and asked for a bite of her squishy squashy mincey to munch flaky bakey crispy to crunchy pie.Then Emily said one bite then she took a bite then went.

Emily looked at her pie then along came Todd a boy he asked for a bite of her squishy squashy mincey to munch flaky bakey crispy to crunchy pie. Emily heard Todd’s stomach rumbling then she said yes then he had one bite and left.

Emily was about to take a bite then Lou came and asked can I have a bite of your squishy squashy mincey to munch flakey bakey crispy to crunch pie I don’t like what I have Then Emily said yes Then Lou took a bite then went.  

A teacher came and said can it be with a ravenous sniff can I have a bite of your squishy squashy mincey to munch flakey bakey crispy to crunchy pie and I will give you some of my maori bread then Emily said yes then the teacher took a bite then she left.

Emily looked at her wonderful pie,all nibbled and gnawed at and poked at and picked all guzzled and gobbled and chewed at and licked, it was almost all gone then she moaned and then she realised she was tricked then she saw Harriet with a cream doughnut. Then Emily asked for a bite.

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