Walt: Writing a story with onomatopoeia.
Task description: We had to try and retell a story using lots of Onomatopoeia. I didn't make this story up, its from a YouTube clip that my teacher showed me.
This is a record of my time at Pt England School in Auckland, New Zealand.
What a great way to introduce you story Deavay. You got me so interested I clicked on and read the complete version. What a lot of onomatopoeia you have used!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Deavay,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tania and I am a teacher who works at lots of different schools, mainly in Northland, supporting teachers and students using their chromebooks for learning. Your blogpost is very inspiring and an awesome way to share your writing in a different way. What a great way to hook me into your story! I loved the enthusiasm and expression in your video clip and you encouraged me to click on your link and read your story. I will share your example with other teachers and students and I am sure you will inspire them too. I hope they leave you some comments.
Tania
This is a great idea Deavay. I love the way you introduce your writing via video. It made me want to click the link and read the rest.
ReplyDeleteWell done
Mrs Burt
Kia ora Deavay.
ReplyDeleteI am Miss Waho from Gilberthorpe School in Christchurch. I have been looking at ways my class can share their writing and I like the way you have used a video of yourself to introduce your writing. I especially like your use of onomatopoeia. It has inspired me to try this out to help my students in their learning.
Ka mau te wehi.