Walt: organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together.
Have you ever been to or seen a Fiafia performance before in your life?. We did Fiafia on a stage at pt england school. Every 2 years you can see a Fia fia performance a pt england school and if you want to see one you have to wait until the 7th of april in the next 2 years.
At Fiafia the group I was in practised in between two classrooms and then we moved into classroom thirteen. We did Fiafia on Thursday, the 7th of April. We did Fiafia on the fields on a stage under a marquee at night. All of the kids and seniors did Fiafia and went in their groups they chose and practised and adults came to watch their children.
The group I was in is called Jump jam and the song we danced to is the ceiling can't hold us and our costume were black cloths with glow sticks. I picked Jump fam because last Fiafia the school did I was in Jump jam and my little brother was in Jump jam too. The kids and seniors had practiced for five or six weeks.
My favorite group performance for Fiafia was the Circus circus group. The reason why I liked Circus circus group was they were really really funny they did front flips and two or one people did it perfect and my friend Awathan was in it and his first performance he landed on his face.
When we walked to our spot were we sit I felt excited for when we got to do our performance. When it was time for the jump jam kids turn I felt a tiny bit nervous but excited. When the Jump jam kids were done we sat down and watch the other performances and I was shivering cold.
Task Description: Writing what we did for Fiafia. Telling the people what Fiafia is all about. Explaining when Fiafia is and what happens
Hi There Deavay, it sounds like you had a great time at Fiafia. I was in the same group as you! I think you could have improved your story with asking the viewers if they liked the food stalls. Did you like the food?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Deavay, it really sounds like you had fun at the Fiafia.
ReplyDeleteI also went to the Fiafia night it was great.2 years ago Me, and my cousins had to make up our own dance for new year. I saw you on stage dancing. But when you were dancing did you feel nervous? Because when I was dancing I was really nervous.
Hi Deavay,I really that you had a good time at Fiafia. It reminds me of last Christmas when my family did a performance. What was the other class room?
ReplyDeleteHi Deavay,I really that you had a good time at Fiafia. It reminds me of last Christmas when my family did a performance. What was the other class room?
ReplyDeleteHi There Deavay, it sounds like you had a great time at Fiafia. I was in the same group as you! I think you could have improved your story with asking the viewers if they liked the food stalls. Did you like the food?
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