Monday, 21 May 2018

Adverb Work D.J

1 - Adverb Challenge: In pairs come up with as many adverbs as you can without using


2 - Without using google, in pairs, create a definition for adverb i.e what is an adverb?
An adverb is a word that describes a verb (how, where when, to what extent and under what condition).

3 - Free write: Create a piece of writing in any style or genre you want.
The key is to make sure it is quality. You challenge is to effectively use at least 10 adverbs.
Once you have finished your writing highlight each of the adverbs in green .

Writer: Deavay. Editor: Justice.

Bobby eggs of steel walked out of his steel house quietly into a forest made of steel he was not supposed
to go into. As he walked into the forest (of steel) he strangely disappeared. He woke up smelling like steel
and walked on. The ground was steel and very cold and super hard and it was very tidy. Magicly
he started to turn into titanium and hit he head on a magnetic (hanging from steel).
He tried very hard to get his head off the magnetic but felt like he hardly done anything.
Mr eggs of steel was finally able to get his head off and tried running home,
but was getting sucked back by the magnetic. He got free of they magnets pull and kept running but
\sadly he fell into a hole. He woke up looking at his surroundings and noticed he was out and not made
of metal anymore and could see his house. He ran and ran, he was almost there. He ran into his room as
he was really sweaty and fell back to sleep.

Zoo writing


Jimmy was a little boy when he was living with his dad (8 years old). His dad would always leave when Jimmy went to school. “Dad where do you go when I'm at school?” jimmy asked. “I go to work” bob replied. (Jimmy’s dad name is bob). “What do you do? Is it like school?” Jimmy asked. “well it's not really like school but it's fun.” bob replied. When it was time for bob to go to work, Jimmy decided to follow him and see what he does. By the time bob got to his work Jimmy barely made it. As Jimmy looked up what he saw amazed him, his dad worked at the zoo. When jimmy got too they entrance his school bus came and forgot that he had a trip to the zoo today. He got in line and hope the teacher didn't know he didn't go school, the teacher didn't noticed him and brings everyone inside. (Jimmy’s classmates where Jake, Tommy, Lily and Jeff. Jake was Jimmy’s best friend and not everyone could go to the trip.)

When the teacher took them to the tiger exhibit Jimmy could see his dad. “hey JIm isn't that yours dad?” asked Jake. Jimmy nodded. Bob was gonna feed the tiger a fish but as soon as the lion opened his mouth, it roared. The Tiger tried to eat Jimmy’s dad (bob). Bob ran around the cage trying to get enough time to go through the door. Lily threw a rock at the tiger to distract it but the tiger kept chasing Bob. After Lily was Jeff, he through a rock at the Tiger and then Tommy then Jimmy then everyone threw rocks at the tiger. The tiger was distracted so Bob took this chance and ran through the door.

At the end of the day Bob and Jimmy went back home after a thrilling event happened. Bob and Jimmy watched the news and saw the tiger gets set free. Bob was happy he got out alive and JImmy was happy bob got out alive too.

The end

Wednesday, 9 May 2018

Museum trip

On Tuesday the 8/5/2018 the EXT group went on an trip to the Auckland museum. For they trip you where supposed to bring you lunch and a water bottle. We went on a bus to get to the museum and it wasn't to long (30-40 minutes). When we got there we walked into the museum, got introduced and split into to groups. The group I was in went to learn about the pacific ocean, our ancestors and other things (one of the things we got told us was we live in they only place that grow sweet potatoes).

For the next part we got split into three groups. Each group got too do one thing until we switched to do the next, they group I was in we look at old items from hundred to thousands of years ago (and photos of them). The second thing my group did was touching old items again from a long time ago, we had to wear gloves because the museum puts chemicals on the items to make them last longer. The last thing was making a case for common items in our house. I had fun doing these.

We had our lunch and had pizza to. After our lunch we got to go to a place in the museum. They split up the ext group into their years (year 5, year 6, year 7 and year 8 were in their year groups). place we went to was the volcano exhibit, their were rocks from volcanoes and we got to lift three rocks. There was a house we got to go inside and feel what a volcano eruption might feel like in a simulator house. In the end we went back on the bus and went back to school. I had fun at the museum.

Monday, 7 May 2018


Made by deavay

There was a boy named rayde he lived with his mum and dad. As he was walking to school he saw something random happen, there was a man making something in his house. Rayde decided to see what it was, he didn't think it will take long as he lived close to his school. As rayde peered into the house the man had vanished but the thing was still their. The thing the man was making seemed to be a fridge, a vacuum, a clock, a potato engine and a photo booth. Rayde didn't know what they man was doing but he thinks the man is crazy. When rayde got to school he saw they same person jump out of a window into a bush, again rayde checked it out and he was gone. it was impossible for they man to just keep disappearing because every could see and hear him. After school rayde look into they crazy man's house and saw new things, a computer, a bag and alot more potatoes. As rayde got back from school he told his mother there was a crazy man stealing potatoes, raydes mother started to think he was crazy. He told his dad and but he said that's a random thing to say.

As rayde was getting ready for bed he saw the man again but rayde couldn't tell what he was holding, it was either milk, more potatoes or something else. In the morning rayde found a potato on his blanket, he found another potato on his uniform and another in his bag. Rayde told his parents there were potatoes in his room but when the looked there was nothing. He checked they crazy man's house again and now there were even more potatoes and milk but when he turned he was getting sucked into the house he looked back but he didn't see what was doing it. He hit his back on the photo booth and fell down. He got back up and couldn't get out as their was glass in the way. He tried to break it but the booth started filling with milk.

Rayde tried screaming for help but nobody came. He felt something touch his leg, as he looked down he saw potato. He searched through the milk and potatoes but could find anything. As they booth filled to his chin the crazy man stood watching him. The booth was almost filled with milk, what would rayde do what could he do. All of an sudden he screamed loudly, he was in his bed not in a photo booth but he could still feel something wet.

The end
To be continued…

Wednesday, 2 May 2018


This is a presentation about our research and planing for my groups DLO for EXT.
My group for EXT is Tidus marshal and me. our planning for our ext animation is also on this