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Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Deavay story ship in half


Ship in half
By Deavay

Jack and John are putting the last details on their spaceship and then load the materials in. John and Jack finished their ship and loaded the materials and gave it fuel and when off and packed oxygen tanks, just in case they ran out. John was looking at papers for their base and then ‘what's that’ John saw something and it was a  meteor. Jack said ‘what's that gonna do’ then it flew in the ship and destroyed the fuel tank ‘THAT THING WAS HUGE’ said Jack. Jack started breathing heavily. The coldness filled the room freezing the room and sucking the air out of the ship.

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Task description: writing a story about a picture. putting a picture with our writing. writing a problem and how it happend and how its solved.

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