Walt: use describing words when writing character descriptions
Task description: write a description explaining the aliens. write some things that describe them like there colors.
Showing posts with label year 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label year 6. Show all posts
Thursday, 21 September 2017
Monday, 18 September 2017
Star dome trip
Walt include a variety of sentence types in our writing
On thursday we were going on a trip to star dome it was three dollars to go, 2$ for the bus and 1$. We were in groups too. On the way me and my friend (we were in they same groups) and played games on the bus while waiting to get to star dome. When we got to star dome we sat down in our lines waiting to go in. have you ever been in star dome before?

Our teacher said that we arrived 10 minutes early so we got to play on the park. They park had an flying fox an tire spinning thing ( I don't know the name of it) and an spider web there was more to the park. After we were finished we got back into our lines than we went inside. What park have you been too?
Inside the building near the entry there was a rocket figure made of lego. In the building there were rocket figures made of lego. There were telescopes, rockets, screens (with info about space shuttles) and other stuff. After that where went too do an quiz with our groups then we went into a dome to watch an short movie. Have you done a quiz about space before?
In the dome we sat on some seats I sat with my friend and we looked up at the dome and watched what happened. Before they movie we say we're jupiter and saturn was at night. When we watched the movie it was about finding a new place to live. When the movie was done we went onto the bus and went back to school. Have you seen a movie about space before?
During our trip I have learnt that we should take of earth better so we don't need to move planets. I also learnt that when making rocket figures it's easier too use lego instead of using a lot of money. I have learnt about titan have methane rain and methane slush rivers.
Task description: write about our trip to star dome. write what we did there and what we learnt. ask question about some things we did.
Image attribution: https://c1.staticflickr.com/1/34/100389179_a162ec82b1_z.jpg?zz=1
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Guardians Of The Galaxy,
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Term Three,
Writing,
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Monday, 11 September 2017
My astronaut
Walt: make connections with what we read, and what we have read before.

Task description: Fill in an image on pixlr editor to make our character. write what his name is, how old he is, whats his country, what is his languages and his skills. write a reason for him to join the mars one project.
Task description: Fill in an image on pixlr editor to make our character. write what his name is, how old he is, whats his country, what is his languages and his skills. write a reason for him to join the mars one project.
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2017,
Deavay,
Guardians Of The Galaxy,
Mr Goodwin,
Pt England School,
year 6
Mars One Project
Walt: make connections with what we read, and what we have read before.
Task description: put images on our slides with attribution. Write when there going to mars who goes what they will do on mars and more. research about the mars one project so we can write down our facts.
Task description: put images on our slides with attribution. Write when there going to mars who goes what they will do on mars and more. research about the mars one project so we can write down our facts.
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2017,
Deavay,
Guardians Of The Galaxy,
Mr Goodwin,
Pt England School,
year 6
Wednesday, 16 August 2017
7 planets 7 men
7 men in 7 rockets ready to blast off into space to explore the 7 other planets and see which one is good to live on. The 7 men got into their rockets suited up and got in there seats and waited go.
All the rockets were big and small to get to certain planets. 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...BLAST OFF!. 7 men blasting off into space in different directions going to different planets, all the men have found their location and stopped to stand on them
bob stood on mercury with his water bottle staring at the gray rocky ground picking up some rocks throwing them in a sack ‘living on this planet is impossible it's to close too they sun, we can't live here’ said bob throwing the sack in his rocket. Now he's blasting off again.
Donny got out his rocket standing on venus staring at the rock and dust, sweating off his hair cooling himself down in his rocket. ‘It's way to hot here it burned my lunch welp I got what I wanted, Man they second planet is way too hot’ said Donny Blasting off again and away he
The planet near the earth the third planet from the sun mars is the one, the forth from the sun, small and red can be seen at night. Mar colors is rust people say it red. ‘Mars is to cold it even froze my water we can't live here we will all be turned to ice ’ said damon getting into his rocket. Now he's blasting off again and away he went.
Jupiter the fifth from the sun, it's also a gas giant the biggest one to. It has lots of moons and their all big. Kooper landed on one of jupiter's moons and threw a can at jupiter. the can fell threw jupiter and got crushed. ‘We can't live on here we all will get crushed and the storms here are dangerous’ said kooper, now he's blasting off again and away he went
A rocket flew around uranus circling it while throwing things into it. ‘Nope not living here it's too cold we can't stand on everything and they sun looks like an little white dot, wel time to go back. Said damion. Now he's blasting off again, and away he went.
Neb went to neptune circled around it's for an while be decided to throw some old junk in it taking an picture too. Neb didn't bother to say anything he just started shivering and now he's blasting off again. Off he goes back to earth.
All the 7 astronauts in their rockets going back too earth the all landed getting out. They all realized that earth
was the perfect planet for them and they didn't need to leave.
Tuesday, 8 August 2017
Mars Postcard
Walt: understand information collected from multiple sources.
Task description: writ a post card to a friend or a with there blog url. write who its from and who its to with a stamp. write to them things about a planet
Task description: writ a post card to a friend or a with there blog url. write who its from and who its to with a stamp. write to them things about a planet
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2017,
2017 reading,
Guardians Of The Galaxy,
Mr Goodwin,
Term Three,
year 6
Wednesday, 2 August 2017
Gorgon
| Walt: understand information collected from multiple sources. |
Task description: writing what he should do when he trying to do something. putting images of a planet for each slide. writing what planet would be good for hiding and crops.
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2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Guardians Of The Galaxy,
Mr Goodwin,
Term Three,
year 6
Monday, 26 June 2017
Kayaking dangers
Walt:write about warning for kayaking
Task description: write a warning for people that are going kayaking. writing 4+ warnings and 4+ precaution.
Task description: write a warning for people that are going kayaking. writing 4+ warnings and 4+ precaution.
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2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Pt England School,
year 6
Thursday, 22 June 2017
News
walt: writing a newspaper

Task description: reading a story and write what happened on the news paper. writing the date making a link and using an image.
Task description: reading a story and write what happened on the news paper. writing the date making a link and using an image.
Thursday, 8 June 2017
Jingle
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2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Mr Goodwin,
Mrs Stickland,
year 6
Wednesday, 7 June 2017
Deavay kayaking
Walt: making connections with what we already know with what we read.
I chose they descente K1 design with 2 white stripes and white triangles at the front and is the colors black. They bottom part of the boat they are 6 white stars and is still black.I think this kayak would be liked by some people because it would break through water easily because they sharp bit. They
design
Task description: designing our own kayak top and bottom. explaining we it has on it what we used and what color it is. writing who this would be for and who would buy it.
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2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Mr Goodwin,
Now Thats Thinking,
year 6
Thursday, 25 May 2017
2 Kids comparison
Walt:Writing a comparison about two kids.
Task description: Writing how long the travel will likely take. writing what we would do during the travel.tell the reader what were using to travel . comparing how different the two kids are.
Task description: Writing how long the travel will likely take. writing what we would do during the travel.tell the reader what were using to travel . comparing how different the two kids are.
Dear Diary
Walt: write in a diary in different times.
Task Description: Writing what traveling in different time eras would be like. writing what we would or did do while traveling. telling the reader what it would be like traveling on a boat and plane.
Task Description: Writing what traveling in different time eras would be like. writing what we would or did do while traveling. telling the reader what it would be like traveling on a boat and plane.
Tuesday, 9 May 2017
Fishing lures
Walt: Think critically about we read.
Task Description: designing Fishing Lures of the colors the fishes like. Explaining whats the difference about Fishing lures and Fishing Hooks. Explaining what Hooks and lures are for.
Task Description: designing Fishing Lures of the colors the fishes like. Explaining whats the difference about Fishing lures and Fishing Hooks. Explaining what Hooks and lures are for.
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2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Mr Goodwin. volcanoes,
Pt England School,
year 6
Thursday, 4 May 2017
This week my number is...
Walt: choosing a 3 by 3 number
Task Description: choosing a 3 by 3 or 4 by 4 number.
Task Description: choosing a 3 by 3 or 4 by 4 number.
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2017,
Deavay,
Mrs Stickland,
Now Thats Thinking,
Pt England School,
Term two,
year 6
Tuesday, 2 May 2017
Deavay emersion assemply term two 2017
Walt: Using exciting language


On they first day of term 2 on monday we had an immersion assembly. At they hall there was a table that had a pc and different kinds of laptops/chromebooks. All the team's had a short movie to show what they were doing and what the will be learning about..
This terms topic is Now That's Thinking. Team 1/3s movie was about kites. Team ones movie was about 4 kites for matariki and four female teachers. Team threes movie was about the stars and how the got there. Team two's movie was making kites like team ones movie. Team fives movie was about fixing and they were building a garden for their class.
Team four was learning about what technology the maori people used in the before they pakeha people came. One of mr goodwin's Ideas (In the movie) was learning about a flux capacitor for a time machine. In team fours movie all the teachers in team 4 discussed what they were going to teach the kids.
I want to learn about technology and how it's works and what kind of technology we used in the past. I want to learn how planes and cars worked in the past. I also want to learn what kind of weapons maori people used in the past. I want to learn how maori people lived and what they did to entertain themselves.
I'm like the topic for term 2 but I thought it's was about drawing because there were drawings of car, people, helicopters and more. I wonder what next term's topic will be and they next thing we're gonna do.
Task description: writing a recount from the first day of term 2 on 2017. explaining what had happen and what was there. explain things the happened in the team movies and what happened in the movies .
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2017,
2017 writing,
Mr Goodwin,
Now Thats Thinking,
Pt England School,
responsibility,
Term two,
year 6
Friday, 7 April 2017
Eating insects
Walt: writing a recount
On Thursday I thought it's was gonna be a normal day but no. Mrs Stickland was our teacher and she said we were eating insects and they were real! But they were dead. We all got into groups and Mrs Stickland gave us a napkins and put crickets on it with mud.
The kids in my group are Lepa, Justice, Arthur, Hopa and Awathan. All of the kids in the group had a cricket but me. I wanted to try the mud and it was disgusting and then I tried a cricket leg and it was crunchy but I spat it out than I had another one and spat it out again. I really didn't like bugs or insects so I didn't eat a full crickets.
In the end I felt sick and Mrs Stickland took the napkins with the crickets and told us we had to write a recount. This was a fun and yuck experience and I never want to eat a bug or touch it. It also tasted like burnt toast. That was a one in a lifetime, I hope!
Task description: we had to write about the experience about eating crickets. adding detail so the reader knows when, what and who ate bugs. writing a recount about eat crickets with mud. explaining what had happen and how we felt about doing this
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2017,
Deavay,
insect,
Mrs Stickland,
Pt England School,
Writing,
year 6
Thursday, 23 March 2017
Mosquito sentence
Walt: explaining a bug
Mosquito
Mosquitoes are a tiny stinging insect but a big nuisance. Female mosquitoes bite everywhere they go. The are annoying bugs that suck our blood, like a tiny Vampire. They make us itch, like we are dogs with fleas. Mosquitoes are a doctor’s worst nightmare because they spread disease.
Task description: writing a paragraph about a bug we choose and we could choose ladybug, mosquito, bee, or a dung beetle. we had to come up with nouns to make our paragraph better. doing research on the bug we chose then add things it can do.
Labels:
2017,
2017 reading,
Deavay,
Mr Goodwin,
Pt England School,
year 6
Thursday, 16 March 2017
Tuesday, 7 March 2017
2017 camp
To more days before camp and i'm excited for it. I really want to watch the movie that I voted for and I hope it's doesn't rain like before so we don't get wet or have too wake up at 3:00 in the morning. I'm nervous about kayaking because I don't know how or what to do but it's still will be fun anyways.
The things i'm excited about is the movie, it might be a movie I haven't seen before because there's only 1 movie I haven't seen. Another thing i'm excited about is the pool where going to I have been there before it's really fun but it's really cold and there's an volcano and to slides. There are two pools a indoor pool and an outdoor pool the indoor one is warn and the other pool is cold, and thes a water park.
I'm hoping for camp to be warm and sunny because it's been really cold lately and cloudy. I'm hoping we could do the kayaking because last camp my team couldn't do because the tide wasn't in and because it's was cloudy.
Something i'm nervous about is our camp dance because it's very weird and hard but we have a good chant. The group i'm in is called the presidents and i'm with three friends and I hope we don't get the least points. I don't know what things were going to do but I really want to make a fire and cook stuff again.
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2017 writing,
Deavay,
Mr Goodwin,
Pt England School,
year 6
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